The part in which was the most notably successful according to feedback was the prostitute bit, where we panned down the body of her prostitute, to reveal her character and representation. This inspired us to do the same with the homeless scene, by panning down the tramp sleeping on the bench, for the same similar successful affect.
Bits that were felt that needed improvements were the lip syncing, in many areas apparently the lip syncing was not in time, and did not appear as if the singer was actually singing the correct words. This inspired us to re film these bits and get them spot on.
Another improvement was to re arrange the structure of our narrative slightly. By the placement of the unfortunate scenarios unravelled in order of severity. For example originally we had the homeless situation first, then prostitute scene then the anti social behaviour scene. We then decided to change the structure so that the anti social scene appeared first, then the prostitute scene and finally the homeless scene. We felt this would convey the message through the video better.
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